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Jude Klinger's avatar

Good one! On the money!

Camila Hamel's avatar

Thank you for reading, Jude. I really appreciate you.

Rob Edwards's avatar

'Sex is a puny convincer these days.' That's the slam-dunk sentence for me. Seals the deal on a stylish story that's packed with punch after punch and, from start to finish, keeps the reader's eye keening for what's up next. A virtuoso literary performance Camila. Thank you.

Camila Hamel's avatar

Many thanks, Rob. :)

CM Torres's avatar

Brilliant storytelling, Camila. Sadly, I personally know people who fit your protagonist to a tee. Could be a housekeeper. Or a cab driver. A friend. A distant relative. An aspiring author trying to make ends meet.