That first sentence really pulled me in - the double meaning of change. I could tell the narrator or at least the writer has a good sense of language and might be playful with it too. Read it all the way through. Curious what the item is/was and whether there are clues in the story I didn’t pick up yet.
It's only alluded to (Police Museum). One gathers it's a weapon of some kind. If this were a first chapter, it would be a tease, but as a finished piece of micro fiction it's only the object of the character's frustration. I may continue with this.
That first sentence really pulled me in - the double meaning of change. I could tell the narrator or at least the writer has a good sense of language and might be playful with it too. Read it all the way through. Curious what the item is/was and whether there are clues in the story I didn’t pick up yet.
It's only alluded to (Police Museum). One gathers it's a weapon of some kind. If this were a first chapter, it would be a tease, but as a finished piece of micro fiction it's only the object of the character's frustration. I may continue with this.
Write more please. I want to see where this goes. Excellent story!
Thanks, Charlie. I'm thinking about that. Let's follow each other, and if there is more you'll get notified!
Sweet! Excited to see what you’ll come up with