Today's Microfiction
This is so good. Love the surrealist feel, things turned inside out, the tension.
Yes...a Yikes! moment.
Thanks, David.
Great story Camila, a kind of muted pain. I like the way you don't describe things we're expecting you to, like the expression in the eyes that wasn't there before. The dialog is good and taut.
Thank you, Karen. I choose what to reveal and what not because sometimes putting in too much is like meddling with the reader's imagination.
This is so good. Love the surrealist feel, things turned inside out, the tension.
Yes...a Yikes! moment.
Thanks, David.
Great story Camila, a kind of muted pain. I like the way you don't describe things we're expecting you to, like the expression in the eyes that wasn't there before. The dialog is good and taut.
Thank you, Karen. I choose what to reveal and what not because sometimes putting in too much is like meddling with the reader's imagination.